Star Wars Episode III – Dark Force Rising
a TRUE FANEDIT by Kerr
This is a streamlined, fast-paced, and hopefully more believable version of Anakin Skywalker’s transformation to Darth Vader. member ratings: |
 INTENTION: CUTLIST:
Cuts removed/added/extended:
- New opening crawl - Cut Anakin’s lines about Grievous’ ship and Vulture Droids, as well as Obi-Wan’s response - Cut Anakin’s “This is where the fun begins” - Cut the missiles and buzz droids - Moved “Oh, I have a bad feeling about this” so it comes in response to Anakin’s “General Grievous’ ship is dead ahead” - Cut the lines about the ship’s shields still being up - Cut Anakin unbuckling his seatbelts - Cut the battle droid’s “There they are! - Cut Anakin’s “I sense Count Dooku” - Cut directly from “Spring the trap” to Grievous’ introduction - Cut the elevator sequence - Added music to the duel with Dooku - Cut Palpatine’s “Get help” etc. and Obi-Wan’s response - Cut Dooku’s jump from the balcony - Cut Anakin’s “My powers have doubled— and Dooku’s response - Cut the balcony falling on Obi-Wan - Cut Palpatine urging Anakin to kill Dooku - Cut from Palpatine’s “You did well, Anakin” to the Star Destroyer attacking Grievous’ ship - Cut Anakin’s “We’re in a bit of a situation here” - Cut Anakin’s “Oops!” - Trimmed the falling elevator scene - Cut Grievous’ “Activate ray shields!” - Cut the “We’re smarter than this” dialogue - Cut bits of the dialogue of the Grievous confrontation - Trimmed the fight on the bridge - Replaced Grievous’ “You lose, General Kenobi!” with “Time to abandon ship, jedi scum!” - Cut Grievous launching the escape pods - Cut Anakin’s “The ability to pilot this thing is irrelevant” - Trimmed the destruction and descent of Grievous’ ship - Cut Obi-Wan’s “We’re still flying half a ship” - Shortened the shuttle landing sequence - Trimmed the conversation between Anakin and Obi-Wan - Cut reference to Grievous being a coward - Cut Anakin’s “Spare parts” line - Cut bits of Anakin and Padme’s reuinion - Replaced venetian blinds transition with a straight cut - Shortened the landing on Utapau - Cut Sidious telling Grievous to send the separatists to Mustafar - Cut balcony scene and Anakin’s nightmare, going directly from Sidious’ closeup to Anakin waking up - Trimmed the conversation between Anakin and Padme - Trimmed the conversation between Anakin and Yoda - Trimmed the conversation between Anakin and Obi-Wan - Replaced the strange transition used after the scene in Palpatine’s office with a linear wipe - Reinserted the “A Plot to Destroy the Jedi?” deleted scenes, with a few cuts and alterations - Cut Anakin’s whining to the Jedi Council when he’s not made a master - Trimmed Anakin and Obi-Wan’s conversation in the hallway of the temple - The scene in the gunship ends with Mace Windu’s “So the prophecy says.” - Trimmed the balcony scene with Anakin and Padme, and ending it after “What is it?” “Nothing— - Reinserted a trimmed version of the “Stirring in the Senate” deleted scene - Shortened the opera scene, removing mention of midichlorians among other things - Cut Yoda’s “Quickly and decisively we must act” - Trimmed the Anakin/Obi-Wan talk before Obi-Wan leaves for Utapau - Reinserted the final “Birth of the Rebellion” deleted scene - Obi-Wan’s adventure on Utapau has been shortened, recut and altered quite extensively - Cut the scene in the Jedi war room - Tightened the scene in Palpatine’s office - Cut Anakin’s “I wish I knew†I know there are things about the Force that they’re not telling me.” - Shortened and reordered Palpatine’s revelation, making Anakin catch on a bit quicker and removing the “Jedi are evil” subplot and Anakin wanting to kill Palpatine - Cut from Grievous’ death to Mace Windu’s “A Sith Lord?” - Changed the “venetian blinds” wipe to an iris - Cut C-3PO walking up to Padme - Cut Palpatine’s “I take it General Grievous has been destroyed, then” - Palpatine’s attack and killing the three Jedi has been made faster - Trimmed Palpatine vs. Windu - Shortened and changed the Anakin/Palpatine/Windu confrontation, removing Palpatine’s first lightning attack among other things - Cut Palpatine’s first “Good— - Cut Palpatine’s “To cheat death— etc. - Cut Anakin’s “Thank you, my master” - Cut Palpatine’s “†along with all the senators” and replaced Anakin’s reply with “I understand, Master” - Cut Palpatine’s “â€including your friend, Obi-Wan Kenobi” - Cut Palpatine’s “We must move quickly— etc. - Reordered some reaction shots of Anakin - The scene ends with Palpatine’s “†to save Padme”. - Cut the scene with Padme watching the burning Jedi Temple - Cut the scene with Bail at the Jedi Temple - Cut the scene with Obi-Wan swimming - Cut the scene with AT-STs searching for Wookiees - Cu t the scene with Yoda leaving Kashyyyk - Replaced the “venetian blinds” transition from Obi-Wan’s ship to Padme’s apartment with a wipe - Cut Anakin’s “I’m fine. I’m fine. I came to see if you and the baby are safe.” - Cut Anakin’s “I will not betray the Republic” - Cut Anakin’s “â€and with the Senate, and with you.” - Cut the dialogue between C-3PO and Padme - Cut Yoda’s “Hmm. Suggest dismantling the coded signal, do you?” and Obi-Wan’s response - Cut the scene with the separatists on Mustafar - Cut the scene with the Tantive IV returning to Coruscant - Cut Nute Gunray’s “Welcome, Lord Vader. We’ve been expecting you.” - Cut Obi-Wan’s “Not even the younglings survived.” - Cut Yoda’s “Killed not by clones— etc. - Replaced Yoda’s “For the clones, to discover the recalibration, a long time it will take” with “Until the time is right, disappear we will” - Cut the dialogue about having to destroy the Sith, and any mention of Yoda going to fight the Emperor - Cut all dialogue in Padme’s apartment before “I need your help” - The scene ends with “Padme†I must find him” - Cut the scene with Padme’s cruiser taking off and Obi-Wan sneaking aboard - Cut Anakin communicating with the Emperor’s hologram - Shortened Padme’s cruiser’s landing on Mustafar - Cut Anakin’s “I saw your ship” - A lot of dialogue between Anakin and Padme has been cut - Added sound effects to Anakin choking Padme - Cut Obi-Wan’s “You have done that yourself” and Anakin’s “You will not take her from me” - Cut Anakin’s “I see through the lies of the Jedi” etc. - Cut “freedom” from Anakin’s list of things he has brought to his new empire - Cut Anakin’s “If you’re not with me” - Cut the dialogue that follows “Then you’re my enemy” - Anakin and Obi-Wan now ignite their sabers nearly simultaneously - The entire Yoda/Emperor duel has been cut - Cut all dialogue during the duel except “This is the end for you, my master” - The duel ends a bit differently than the original - Cut all dialogue after Anakin’s defeat except “You were my brother, Anakin. I loved you.” - Padme doesn’t wake up on the cruiser - The Emperor’s arrival on Mustafar has been moved to after the first Polis Massa scene, and has been cut so Anakin appears to truly be dead when the Emperor finds him - Cut Padme losing her will to live - Cut the birth and naming of the babies - Cut the entire “NOOOOO!!!!” scene - Cut the entire scene on Tantive IV, making Padme’s dying “There’s still good in him” the last words to be spoken in the movie - Added fan edit credits Disclaimer: You must own the original movie before acquiring any FanEdited movie. We here at FanEdit.org respect the company’s copyrights, and don’t want to infringe on any company’s rights. Thank you, FE! Maybe downloadable from Fanedit.info (enter and download at your own risk and responsibility)
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(16 votes, average: 9.06 out of 10, rated)
smooth cuts throughout and a bold take on Palpatine’s transformation – very good cut.
Review by Jaba4017 — December 16, 2010 @ 11:12 am
Just finished and I would say that for now, this is my preferred version of Ep. III. It really is streamlined, cutting out so much unnecessariness, and is easy to understand. The audio and video quality is top notch as well. There are some further audio cuts I would make (some fixable, some only partially so but preferrable to the audio as-is) and remove a few lines and such here and there (some one-liners, and…he left in the Tarzan yell?!), but overall, the choices made were very good. As mentioned above, the transformation scene is interesting, too. Overall, I loved how quickly things got going and remained that way, but the scenes that needed length (some solemn, like Anakin and Padme pondering on their balconies) remained as well and helped the story elements.
Overall, I’m giving this a 9/10. Great effort!
Review by Ripplin — December 25, 2010 @ 12:58 am
Damn, Kerr really knows what storytelling means…
This is a SW prequel and this is almost a good movie too, incredible!
The pace is just perfect. Maybe some scenes felt a bit short to me, and 86 minutes
is not exactely “Star Wars canonâ€, but well, in this case less is more and it shows!
Kerr managed to cut every redundancy possible and so certain scenes that were boring in the original
are now interesting because the audience learn something new.
All the cringe inducing lines and scenes have vanished. Some lines reorganized to make the characters
sound like they are actualy talking to each others and not reading George’s corny dialogue.
Oh, and the useless “catch me if you can†boring first 30 minutes of the original movie are now a real ride!
There already were some good edits of this movie, but this cut is the best SW prequel I’ve seen to date.
Only the very short lenght, that do not feel like a SW movie, and some audio cuts
(not bad, but just a bit obvious at times) prevent me to rate it the maximum. But it is a very…VERY solid 9/10.
A must see IMO.
Review by TMBTM — January 6, 2011 @ 1:18 am
If there is one thing that can be truthfully said about Dark Force Rising, it’s its fast-pacing. This, unfortunately, is also one of the things that keeps DFR from being the perfect fanedit of Episode III it comes so close to being. It’s frantic pacing breaks the flow of the plot as it jumps from action scene to action scene with little to no pacing, making the edit seem less “fast-paced” and more “rushed”. Fortunately, however, the hectic pacing is only noticeable in the first act of DFR (due understandably to the removal of the approach to Grievous’s ship and the elevator sequence, two somewhat unnecessary scenes)and thankfully does not carry on into the rest of the movie.
On the matter of sound quality: During the lightsaber battle with Count Dooku, the sounds of the lightsabers swinging and clashing sound muffled and somewhat muted. Whether this was an issue with adding the music into the battle (an obvious and necessary addition) or a problem with editing film itself, It felt off and a little distracting.
Another grievance I wish to voice is the placement of the “Birth of the Rebellion” scene. In it, Padme is defending Palpatine and the senate, but is eventually swayed into believing that the Supreme Chancellor may have ulterior motives. In the scene that Kerr places immediately BEFORE “Birth of the Rebellion” Padme has already reasoned that Palpatine’s council may be corrupt and is trying to convince Anakin of the fact. To me, it would make sense to place Padme’s “What If We’re on the Wrong Side” conversation after she has been persuaded by Mon Mothma, Bail Organa, and the rest of the building Rebellion that the council might be corrupt in the “Birth of the Rebellion” sequence.
Finally, I found the way that Kerr changed the ending of the Obi-Wan/Anakin fight to be… well, interesting (it’s not listed in the cutlist, so I’ll keep it a secret for viewers). I found it to be unintentionally hilarious and those who have seen the edit will know what I’m talking about. It’s just my own personal opinion, and I could see the notion behind the change, but it just didn’t strike the right chord with me.
Whew. Now that we’ve swept through Dark Force Rising’s flaws, let’s move on to the things I loved:
Combining Obi-Wan’s “Oh, I don’t think so” force push with the Clone cavalry busting in was a great move. It makes it really seem as if the tables are suddenly turning in Obi’s favor and gives good reason for Grievous to run away. An excellent, creative move that I never thought of.
The re-edited “reveal” of the Emperor was fantastic, as was the entire Windu vs. Palpatine battle. Removing the flips and spins and focusing on just striking sabers takes me back the lightsaber battles of the original trilogy. On the matter of the reveal of the Emperor, kudos to Kerr. Removing the redundancy Palpatine’s first lightning strike made Palpatine’s sudden lightning attack on the recently de-handed Windu all the more (if you’ll pardon the pun) shocking.
As promised, Anakin’s turn to the dark side is less sudden and is more of a fade starting with his trust of Palpatine, leading to his distrust of the Jedi, and ending with Anakin’s transformation into Darth Vader. Anakin’s subplot in Dark Force Rising is not the same subplot from Revenge of the Sith. It’s what we all wanted it to be: a believable fall from brother to monster.
There are many other great cuts here and there that Kerr makes, most removing repetitious dialog and bad acting.
Overall, a pretty sweet fan edit. Not perfect, but definitely one of the best fanedits of Episode III I’ve ever seen, if not the best so far.
Some might say that it’s shortened length makes it feel like it’s not a Star Wars film. I disagree. By trimming the fat and enhancing scenes, Kerr has made a remarkable piece of Fan Edit showmanship. If anything, the worst that can be said about Dark Force Rising is that it doesn’t feel like a full Star Wars film.
Awkward pacing, some (very minor) sound problems, some scenes where straight cuts should have been used instead of fades, and some mishandled scenes are the only things you’ll find wrong with Dark Force Rising. Ultimately, it shows how one can turn a 134 minute disappointment into an 88 minute experience through simple editing.
7.5/10
Review by Brentendo64 — January 8, 2011 @ 6:50 am
Kerr at it again!
And as usual this edit doesn’t disappoint.
With Star Wars edits I’m a bit oversaturated right now so I didn’t see myself watching another take on Episode 3 but Kerr’s cuts had me intrigued and after watching the workprint I knew this edit was gonna be a great ride.
And ride is the correct word since I’ve never seen a Star Wars movie that fast. But despite all the things that have been cut this edit felt richer than the original. This is partially due to the re-inserted scenes of the rebellion’s birth but mostly due to the change of dialog. Kerr manages with some re-arrangements and omissions to give the jedi more purpose and tactic.
It still doesn’t explain why they send away their best warrior when they know the sith lord is in coruscant, but by reinserting the mace/obi/yoda meeting right before anakin is “accepted” to the jedi council it seemed like they were really thinking how to effectively play palpatine.
Also when Obi Wan approaches anakin after that scene and assigns him to spy it really seems like the doings of yoda and mace to discover palpatine’s motivations.
Anakin profits by having less annoying lines and acting more mature (no freak out infront of the council, he just nods and later on rants when he is with obi wan). Babies on the lake of naboo scene is gone for good.
A special highlight to me is the re-arrangement of the fight between obi wan and grievous, when I saw it the first time i had to rewind a few times because the way the fight flows now is 100times better than the original, this scene alone warrants to download this edit.
At the end it was a little too quick for my taste and there were some transitions i was not that much of a fan but at least kerr got rid of lucas’s excessive transition effects thourought revenge of the sith.
All in all, while not perfect, this is the best Revenge of the Sith edits I have yet seen
8/10
Review by Sunarep — January 9, 2011 @ 11:33 pm
This was far and away the absolute best edit of Episode III I have ever seen. I don’t really know what else to say other than if this had been the film released in theater, us fanboys would’ve had to find something else to bitch about all the time.
Kerr, I really hope you do the other two prequels or maybe Jedi, as those could really use work similar to what you did here.
Review by spence101287 — January 10, 2011 @ 9:19 am
This has been the first fan edit of Episode III that I’ve seen, and I must say that you’ve set the bar very high. Well Done!
And… THANK YOU for pulling out Jar Jar and his whole thing with the senate. That was really well done, and I honestly didn’t miss it at all.
*applauds*
Review by ionvox — January 13, 2011 @ 2:10 pm
Absolutely Excellent best version of the film I’ve seen..great edit and made the movie more emotional and it moved quickly like an old serial. Even at an hour and 20 odd minutes it felt like a complete film..I couldn’t remember what was cut out except for most of the painful dialogue. Best fanedit I’ve seen of Sith.
Review by cinedream — January 16, 2011 @ 4:02 am
I feel like a moron. I was thinking when I looked this edit up that I’ll just download the compressed version, since it will take so much longer to download the DVD version, plus if I don’t like it, then I’m not saddled with 4 gb of data for it.
Well, that was stupid.
This is freaking awesome. It epitomizes the philosophy that less is indeed more. As many of Anakin’s (and others) horrid lines are removed as possible. Needless exposition and/or restating of plot points by characters are also removed. We see actions and their consequences, consequences, mind you, that seem more logical than they did in the original cut.
No longer is Anakin whining like a baby over everything that happens to him. He is now brooding and confused (for all his lack of acting skill, the one good thing Hayden Christensen can do is look confused). He keeps most of his concerns to himself, letting them simmer in his mind while Palpatine continues to manipulate him. Instead of corny, lovey dovey talk, we see Anakin distancing himself from his wife and she from him as the secrets they keep from one another multiply. All the while, even though it’s a short while, the viewer actually gets to see why Anakin, with all these great things going for him – Jedi hero, loving wife, baby on the way – eventually decides that he can only trust Palpatine. The trust theme becomes so much bigger, even the the time for build-up is smaller. This is truly masterful work.
I also have to put in a special comment about lightsaber battles. Red Letter Media brought up an overarching issue with the Prequels that I agree with wholeheartedly, i.e. the lightsaber battles essentially lack heart. They look and feel over-choreographed, where as Luke’s fights with Vader in the OT look more raw and emotional. I don’t know if Kerr felt the same way, but his edits to the two major lightsaber battles bring back the emotional aspect as best as can be for the prequels. Windu and Palpatine now have a lightsaber battle, not a wire fight/modern dance/gymnastics exhibition. It’s now quicker and more wicked. The other jedi masters, with the exception of smiley braintail guy (there’s naught one can really do about that guy – I’m really OK with just assuming he sucks at lightsaber battling), also appear more surprised by the attack, which has become an essential element in most Episode III edits.
Similarly, Obi Wan’s fight with Anakin is tighter and angrier. These guys are now in a fight, not a video game. They’re not concerned with how good their force push abilities are, just blocking the next strike. There are a few force jumps in there at appropriate points, but now it’s almost as if the first guy who tries to get fancy in the fight gets 3/4 of his limbs cut off. The edit to Obi Wan’s action after attaining the “high ground” (which thankfully he no longer deems it necessary to explain) is also interesting and effective. By removing dialogue, Kerr has still made it look like Obi Wan knows, or as least suspects, Anakin’s next move. The transition between Obi Wan’s (feigned?) move to walk away and his fast move to chop Anakin to pieces is a little rough, but totally forgivable. I also wish that Kerr would have fit Anakin screaming “I hate you!” in there somewhere, but again, that’s totally cool.
As a final nicety, Kerr has said, “NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” to leaving in any part of James Earl Jones’s “NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!” We get to see Vader’s birth, and the first trademark breath. That’s it. Simple. Effective. Beautiful. Those three words really sum up the whole of the edit.
I’m giving this a 9.5 out of 10, which rounds up to 10 anyway.
Review by buddythegoon — January 27, 2011 @ 7:16 pm
Because I have a workprint of my own for Episode III, I have shied away from watching other editors takes on it. I actually enjoyed Episode III in the theaters, at least when compared to Episode I & II. By its very nature, because of where it must point to (episodes 4, 5 & 6) and because Lucas wasted a lot of time in Episodes I & II, content alone made III the best of the Prequel. But while it was great in the theater, it didn’t hold up well under repeated viewing. The beginning, while closer in feeling to Star Wars action was a bloated mess, Anakin was still a whiner, Padme was weak and uninteresting, and worst of all, Anakin’s turn to the Dark Side felt uneven, there was something there at the base, but it has always just felt off.
As with all of my reviews, they are intended as constructive evaluations of the edit and no offense is intended to the editor.
AUDIO
Audio quality was spectacular. Kerr’s touch was amazing. He added music in the perfect places, never overpowering, but perfect for the scene. Many times his additions were so subtle that I think only people who know the movie with the intimacy of having edited it would notice them. His blending of scenes was fantastic, and his very subtle additions were perfect. 10/10
VIDEO
Overall quality was very good. The new crawl seemed to stutter and surge and at times the quality seemed not quite as good as the original, but overall held up well on my 52″ Plasma. The editing itself was seamless. The transitions, wipes, minor tweaks (and this edit is FULL of tweaks) were transparent and again, really only someone who knows this thing back and forth will notice where he has done his work. 9/10
STORY
How does this compare to the original? AMAZING. BRILLIANT. This is for the time being, my absolute go-to version of E3. It doesn’t hurt that I would guestimate that my work print shares numerous concepts and even identical edits as Kerr’s, but his editor’s knife was absolutely brilliant. Anakin is no longer whining. No longer brooding (in the wrong way) but definitely alone, increasingly isolated and trapped. To some degree his character felt a little hallow, I wanted more depth, but that is not the fault of Kerr, he pulled the most out of what was available, and I’ll take an Anakin that is a little flat, over one that is whining, brooding and intolerably annoying. Padme’s character is slightly improved and benefits from the use of deleted scenes. A particularly impressive improvement is the turning point of Anakin’s life in Palpatine’s office; this was simply JAW DROPPING. When I caught on to how Kerr was handling this I literally applauded from my sofa. Every clip, nip and tuck that Kerr made up to this point had narrowed Anakin’s choices, boxed him into a corner, and made him *gasp*… sympathetic, and so when the moment finally came, it was in fact believable. This achievement alone makes this edit worth it. It is the entire point of the movie, and Kerr’s approach succeeds wonderfully.
*spoiler*
There were only a few choices that I didn’t care for. The jump from Padme’s balcony to her arriving on Mustafar was just too much for me. It was the only time where I actually felt rushed. While this edit moves very briskly, I never felt like things were missing, or that corners were being cut. TMBTM has commented that the length of this edit doesn’t ‘feel’ Star Wars-like, and I have to agree, the pace is very fast, but that is really the only choice to make because the thing that draws this movie out is tons of useless screen time. For most of the edit while the pace is brisk, nothing is ever missing, everything lines-up. Every scene leads logically to the next and no important piece of information, or emotion is left out, until the balcony scene. It was the only point in the movie where as a viewer I felt “oh, we’re missing a piece of the story” Not that it was critical, and it in fact leaves it ambiguous, did Padme bring Obi-Wan with her on purpose, or did he sneak on? I think Kerr’s intention is to have her bring Obi-Wan there, but it just doesn’t feel correct and without the transition scene of her leaving and Obi-Wan sneaking aboard, I just felt like that subconscious beat that a good movie has, was off. But really, that’s about it.
His choice to cut out Yoda vs Palpatine is a struggle for me. While watching the movie, it’s not really missed. The pacing of Anakin and Obi-Wan’s battle benefits from the removal. This is the battle that we’ve waited 20 years for. Now it happens in brilliant, fast-paced, every-man for himself fashion, right up to a brilliant finale. But as the movie begins to wrap, you’re left with questions, where was Yoda? Why was he hanging out an a rock with Bail instead of joining Obi-Wan? Surely if they’re going up against the most powerful Jedi ever, they would want their combined abilities. (this is of course a problem that Kerr inherited from the original, the choice to split up and attach each Sith individually was idiotic and forced) so Kerr isn’t entirely at fault here, but his choice to cut out Yoda/Palpatine highlights this problem.
Story Improvement: 10/10
But overall I can EASILY forgive both of these ‘issues’ because the sum of this edit is so amazing.
OVERALL
This is simply the best Star Wars fanedit that I have seen to date because it makes Revenge of the Sith a truly great movie. Not just acceptable. Not just watchable, but worthy of the title Star Wars. It tells the story that we have been waiting to see, but without whining, without insipid dialogue, over-explained context, brow-beating political diatribes. It’s fast, fun, dark and ultimately, satisfying.
10/10
Thank you Kerr. Now I just need a worth Episode II and the Circle shall be complete.
Review by L8wrtr — January 28, 2011 @ 9:07 am
Hats off to Kerr- this is an amazing Episode 3 fanedit. Amazing that at 88 minutes in length, it did not feel like a chop-up hack of the original! I have been planning an Episode 3 edit in my head for some time, and Kerr’s edit has a very close feel to what I am planning, and I have to admit, he added several concepts that I may “borrow”.
Quick list of things I loved: Along with all of the usuals that accompany any Episode 3 fanedit (balcony scene removal, less Anakin whining, etc), the opening battle sequence moves at a strong pace and gets to the point, Grievious has been retooled to be far more sinister (and his hacking cough is almost all gone!), the deleted scenes add extra texture as to how Palpitine works Anakin against the senate/Jedi, Anakin’s fall is far more believable, the Obi/Aniakin fight is nicely condensed, (but I still can’t stand those damn floating discs), Padme’s death and the ending works far better.
Wish list: Wish the audio was Dolby Digital 5.1 as opposed to Dolby Surround. Also, the video quality was passable, but barely. Was very obvious that this is at least two generations away from the original DVD quality (The original Ep 3 DVD has the sharpest and best picture of the Prequel Trilogy).
Conclusion: There were a few moments I would remove from this edit, and a few moments I would add back in, but for now, this stands as my “best of” Episode 3 edits, and sits alongside L8wtrs Episode One, and my edit of Episode 2 – It is nice to actually enjoy the Prequel trilogy again – thank you.
Review by Diamond Wan — March 6, 2011 @ 10:24 am
I forgot to mention perhaps my favorite part of Kerrs edit in my previous review – How he handled Palpitine becoming “Prune Face” is a standout – although I eagerly await Bob Garcia’s digital handywork on this scene which looks to top Kerrs excellent editing and digital lighting work.
Overall 9/10
Review by Diamond Wan — March 7, 2011 @ 1:19 am
Dear Kerr,
Just got done watching this on YouTube. It’s not an easy film to edit, but you made what I thought were some very innovative choices during a few key moments that I haven’t seen tried before. Your solution to the Palpatine transformation problem, the fast-paced, uncut Mustafar duel and pretty much the entire third act of the film were all examples of how we can turn garbage into greatness just by snipping a few shots.
For example, look how much more effective the Vader transformation is without the “Frankenstein” scene. And you don’t even miss it! Padme’s death also felt so much more poignant.
One thing I was hoping for was a change in the voice of the “surfer dude” Neimoidian on Grevious’ ship. Just a pet peeve of mine. And I thought there was a slight misstep in the order of the birth of the Rebellion scene and Padme and Anakin’s talk at her apartment. I think if you flip the order of those two scenes, it would be much more effective because it provides the causation for Padme to start doubting the Republic’s stance on the war.
But those two tiny quibbles aside, it’s still a ten-star review for me. I think it’s the best edit of ROTS to date. I only wish there was a DVD version available. It would be my preferred version of Episode III.
Very, very good work!
–InfoDroid
Review by InfoDroid — April 9, 2011 @ 1:30 am
A lot has already been said, but I have a few things to add. 1st, On a separate but related philosophical note, I think it is interesting how fanedits evolve with some popular movies such as this. Editors build on the work previous editors do, which is understandable and mostly fine, however there probably should be some recognition in these situations of those influences that have come before us. Like or hate George Lucas, he deserves credit for his work. Likewise so do other editors that contributed in some indirect or direct way to an individual’s final cut. Fanediting is an odd business, but it is ultimately no different than any other artistic or scientific endeavor, except that of course there won’t be any lawsuits. When I watch Spence’s version of ROTS (or was it HAL9000’s??) he paved the way for how the end anakin obiwan fight scene should play out. Then there was Stankpac’s edit of ROTS that incorporated Spence’s work (who credited him for it), and then proceeded to lay out a bold vision for how the rest of the movie should play out. His work on the opening is particularly noteworthy. But really when you compare Stankpac’s edit with this scene-for-scene, it is clear that Stankpac inspired much of the work presented here. Not saying what Kerr has done here is bad, but I am just saying what noone else has said and give credit where credit is due.
Now, regarding the specifics of new changes Kerr has made, the good news is that I think his additions and changes to scene arrangement did ultimately succeed in his stated primary goal of trying to make Anakin seem like a little less of a tool and more of a victim, so props for that! I am not going to dissect each scene here, but suffice it to say that there were some changes Kerr has made from Stankpac’s version that I liked and some I didn’t like. The one I will mention that most stands out in my mind (probably because it was one of the last) that annoyed me was how Anakin turns off his lightsaber and turns his back on Obiwan. I also preferred Stankpac’s arrangement of the end epilogue sequences, although once again both are very, very similar.
You definitely deserve some credit from an audio editing standpoint. Your tinkering with sound effects and voice over work, did not go unnoticed, and I mostly enjoyed that aspect. On the other hand, your edit is only in 2.0 stereo, which was disappointing for me.
Video resolution/compression quality I thought was quite good for a SL DVD, though it looked as if you were missing a bit of contrast in the whites and blacks? It certainly didn’t look bad, but I can’t help but wonder if a bit of clipping occurred in these ranges at some point in your editing workflow.
Video quality: 8/10
Sound quality: 8/10
Creativity/originality: 6/10
Technical editing work: 9/10
Review by geminigod — April 26, 2011 @ 1:54 am
I am giving this one higher marks than other ROTS edits because it is almost all seamless. I don’t agree with all the choices but at least the movie doesn’t look like it was beaten up with the cutting stick like another edit (I won’t name names).
Review by DarthRazorback — August 15, 2011 @ 11:02 pm
Just finished it…and, man this was amazing. Everything worked so much better than the original, the deleted scenes insertions are well-timed and make a better story. The Yoda/Palpatine duel is not missed, yet I thought it would be. The agonizing decision that Anakin makes is tense and far more believable, and extremely emotional. It starts out in an upbeat way and ends on the darkest note possible, with just a glimmer of (A New) hope in those twin suns.
The shortened run time is perfect – now it plays more like an extended episode of The Clone Wars, which works so well. IMHO The Clone Wars series’ far outclass all of the original prequels anyway.
An excellent way to prelude Adywan’s ANH:R! Snaps and much respect to Kerr and all the other editors who directly or indirectly contributed. In the three or so years I’ve been a member here, I haven’t watched any of the others, so I cannot make any comparisons. But, man, this effing rocks! 9.5 lightsabers, just want a Hi-def fully-sick 5.1 version now for that extra .5!
Review by darthscourge — October 8, 2011 @ 3:52 pm