Comments on: Star Wars Episode 1: Master And Apprentice http://fanedit.org/329/ The wonderful world of movies - edited by fans for fans Thu, 09 Sep 2010 05:55:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: ThrowgnCpr http://fanedit.org/329/comment-page-1/#comment-5864 ThrowgnCpr Tue, 13 Nov 2007 16:51:09 +0000 http://fanedit.org/wpTF/?p=403#comment-5864 Technically, this edit was pretty good. I have not actually seen Magnoliafan's edits, so I can not comment on how different this edit was. I was somewhat disappointed in the edit. There are many Phantom Menace edits, and I was hoping for something very different, but many of the same annoyances were still there. I guess it is hard to polish this turd. But since this edit didn't really go beyond the others I will give it 3/5 for storytelling. The video quality was quite nice. I would give it a 5/5 for being very clean and crisp. My only small complaint with the video editing (more appropriate for the story) was the crawl. Although the starfield was beautiful, and technically it was fine, the crawl itself was extremely long, and as a result ran fast. I had to pause many times to read everything. Other than this, the video was very nice. The audio was not as nice. It cracked a lot and dropped out on many of the louder parts, particularly the battles. As far as the audio editing it was fine. Most of the alien voices were an improvement, although sometimes you could tell it was just playing backwards. Also, there were some music parts that were very noticeably chopped. The cracking in the audio bothered me, so I give it a 2/5 so to sum it up: storytelling: 3/5 video: 5/5 audio: 2/5 This was a nice start, and hopefully Horace continues to edit and improves upon some of the things from this Thanks for the edit Technically, this edit was pretty good. I have not actually seen Magnoliafan’s edits, so I can not comment on how different this edit was. I was somewhat disappointed in the edit. There are many Phantom Menace edits, and I was hoping for something very different, but many of the same annoyances were still there. I guess it is hard to polish this turd. But since this edit didn’t really go beyond the others I will give it 3/5 for storytelling.

The video quality was quite nice. I would give it a 5/5 for being very clean and crisp.

My only small complaint with the video editing (more appropriate for the story) was the crawl. Although the starfield was beautiful, and technically it was fine, the crawl itself was extremely long, and as a result ran fast. I had to pause many times to read everything. Other than this, the video was very nice.

The audio was not as nice. It cracked a lot and dropped out on many of the louder parts, particularly the battles. As far as the audio editing it was fine. Most of the alien voices were an improvement, although sometimes you could tell it was just playing backwards. Also, there were some music parts that were very noticeably chopped. The cracking in the audio bothered me, so I give it a 2/5

so to sum it up:
storytelling: 3/5
video: 5/5
audio: 2/5

This was a nice start, and hopefully Horace continues to edit and improves upon some of the things from this

Thanks for the edit

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