After having now watched a few different edits of this movie in my attempt to find the perfect version, you deserve credit for choosing wisely regarding the extended scenes you chose to add and not add. Qui Gon’s voiceovers came as a surprise. I personally thought it was a nice touch. It gives Yoda an out of the situation vs. fighting to the death, which is more what I would expect Yoda to do in that situation when there is that much at stake. It also ties into the speech about communing with the dead at the end (although personally I would have completely edited that scene since it makes no sense that that would be some fancy jedi power considering that Luke is able to do it instantly after Obi Wan dies.