I can tell you put a lot of thought into the development of anakin, and that was very well done. The added scenes with Organa conspiring were also great and much needed. Lots of little cuts not made I wish were there. Some decisions at the end could be debated either way with the removal of yoda fight scene, but I thought you did well there with the choices you made. The series of short fade cuts right at the end with darth vader was a nice touch to quickly get him off the planet but became distracting when they continued for about 3 times longer than was comfortable to watch.

This edit should have gotten 7/10 stars if not for the added junk at beginning.

I never did like many of the comedic or silly moments in all the movies and the various cuts are a definite improvement.
The double ‘first meeting’ because of the extra Grevious scene is a problem but its better than the elevator scene.
Didnt miss the dream sequences. Sometimes the audience needs to see the dream as a frame of reference but it doesnt work well. So it was best removed.
I dont recall the cut balcony scene offhand but it wasnt needed.
Good getting rid of the whole Midichlorian thing. It should never have been added and The Force kept fully mystical. In the end it was only a plot device to get Qui-gon interested in little Ani and see him as the chosen one.
The Grevious chase without the Boga does miss the lack of a ‘catching up’ transition.
Good removing Chewbaccas name. He is part of ep4-6 and should come into his own in those movies. Same with naming the babies. Actually in ways I feel the same about tying in Bobba Fett.
Birth of the Rebellion scenes help quite a lot. Ep 1 and 2 should have been more political but such things dont play well with kid audiences. After all, in many ways Star Wars movies are kids movies on steroids.
The Darth Sideous zapping Windu probably didnt need to be shortened. I dont recall Anakin’s regret either but it wouldnt fit anyways. He made his choice.
The removal of the Yoda / Darth Sideous battle does give Yoda more of the wiseman role.
Making the duel one long scene is the best edit in the movie and its too bad the Luke/Vader duel in ep6 didnt follow the same example.
I do have to disagree on ending the movie on the birth of Darth Vader. The tone of the movie was dark pretty much all the way through and it should end on somewhat of an upbeat note. Also, the music when he rises isnt somber enough and doesnt fit.

In the end this edit gives Revenge of the Sith much greater depth in tone and seriousness. More of an adult movie actually.