Review Detail

9.5 3 10
birthday_presents_front.jpg
Shorts September 11, 2016 5537
Overall rating
 
9.0
Audio/Video Quality
 
9.0
Audio Editing
 
10.0
Visual Editing
 
10.0
Narrative
 
7.0
Enjoyment
 
8.0
A nice short that is quite a transformation from the source material. The editing is very well done. Narratively, Mark still comes off like a bit of a psycho in the beginning. There is a slight implication that he might be watching porn or snuff. Having him view something a bit tamer might have better sold that he was just a lonely, but harmless guy. A minor point though, and there is a lot of great editing on display!

User Review

Format Watched
Digital
Was this review helpful? 0 0

Comments

1 results - showing 1 - 1
Ordering
October 03, 2016
"There is a slight implication that he might be watching porn".

That was intentional, I arranged the first few shots of the projected film to be nudie ones, so the viewer might very well think that, before finding out it was something quite different. Maybe it was mistake, if the viewer is already thinking Mark is suspect.
1 results - showing 1 - 1