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Primary Objectives
- The soundtrack remains one of the best in my opinion, but while the sourced songs have stood the test of time, the material composed by Simon Boswell now feels a bit dated to me. I'm giving myself a +5 year anachronistic license to bring in more material to fill it out some, mostly so I can lean heavily into Mezzanine from '98, which I'm sure they would have used had it been available.
- Remove or replace the "formulas in space" nonsense used to convey hackers deep in thought.
- Replace some of the computer screens that look more like screensavers than actual user interfaces. Note: I'm not going to go too far with this. Viewers still need to be able to read the screens to follow along, so this will still feature lots of "movie friendly" displays.
- As much as I want to completely re-do the computer room at Ellingson Mineral Corporation it's really outside the scope of my abilities. We'll be keeping the ridiculous 3D, "flying through the operating system" moments, but I'll be trimming them substantially. Note: I'm not sure how I'll tackle the stupid scene near the end with all the viruses...
- Remove some of the cringey miss-steps in the screenplay (Joey agonizing over handle names, the group ogling the girl in red, etc.)
- Trim The Plague's lines some to make his character seem a little more thoughtful.
- Generally make Margo seem less dumb, and cut down on the bickering between her and The Plague.
- Improve the flat soundscape a bit (city noises are largely absent).
- Downgrade the appearance of the Davinci virus so it looks less like real video.
- Replace some of the poor quality typing sounds with direct recordings from my authentic IBM Model M
- Fix the Phreak's, "28.8 bps modem" line. It should be "kbps".
- Minor colour grade adjustments here, and there. In particular The Plague's house which looks a bit like a soap opera set.
Changes
- Custom "futon88" logo courtesy of @DyslexicFcuker
- Added dedication.
- Changed music during initial raid scene.
- Added custom title.
- Removed what appears to be a very long hair from the "SEVEN YEARS LATER" plate.
- Desaturated Dade's computer screen in three shots to draw less attention to it.
- Adjusted VFX during ARPS takeover to look more like a typical terminal.
- Dade now cuts off the "America First" guy sooner. No longer says, "yak yak yak, get a job!".
- Removed Joey proposing possible handles.
- Created custom transition to Cyberdelia.
- Changed music during school hack and sprinkler test.
- Removed Cereal getting blamed for eating the fries.
- Different music when Joey hacks the Gibson.
- Different SFX soundscape when Joey hacks the Gibson.
- Custom keyboard foley when Joey hacks the Gibson.
- Removed all of The Plague's lines when Penn calls him. He no longer calls Penn a technoweenie, and no longer insists on being called "The Plague".
- Removed cut back to the server room for the phone call. We hear everything Hal says over the phone.
- Colour-corrected Joey's Gibson flyover. It's green in that first shot, while it's more cyan in all other shots.
- Shorted VR OS flyover when Joey connects.
- Different VFX when Joey connects to The Gibson.
- Removed shot of Gibson with electricity flowing up it.
- Different VFX when Joey finds and starts downloading the "Garbage File".
- Several microcuts to better align music during Joey's hack.
- Removed weird sound coming from Belford's PC.
- Removed code vision when Joey looks at the garbage file.
- Removed VR OS flyover when Plague echos Joey's terminal session.
- Removed Joey lunging for his computer when they come to pick him up. The butt shot is as awkward as his mom's reaction.
- Removed Margo making fun of of how Eugene dresses.
- Removed Eugene blaming Margo for not changing her password (the blame is clear from the look he gives her)
- Removed Margo being dumb about what it means for a tanker to flood its tanks.
- Belford now says, "...a virus" instead of "...the virus".
- Downgraded appearance of DaVinci virus.
- Different music during DaVinci briefing and escalator.
- Fixed the audio on, "What the hell was that all about?". All of the lines in this scene are clearly looped except that one, which was used from audio on set. There's a lot of background noise that's carried with it.
- Removed Margo telling Eugene to "get the file, otherwise you'll lose all your toys."
- Removed the Hacker's Manifesto scene. None of our core characters are in this scene, and the manifesto is a touch cringey in 2023.
- Removed Phreak and Cereal's weird teasing after they mention Kate will be at the party.
- Different music when Belford is in the VR simulator.
- Different music when the secret service intercepts Dade at home.
- Removed shots of Dade doing rapid fire things on the laptop.
- Removed "Blow me" / "Thank you"
- Removed atmospheric music during Dade / Eugene conversation.
- Remove Cereal's nonsense at the party; it's all badly looped audio anyways and doesn't align to his mouth.
- Removed the guys talking about the girl in the red dress and Nikon doxxing Lisa. Having a good memory doesn't explain why he knows everything about her...
- Removed the "Look at that pooper...spandex is a privilege...etc." line.
- Fixed Phreak saying "28.8 bps modem". Now he just says, "28.8 modem", which is also acceptable.
- The guys no longer watch Kate making out for as long. Dade gets her attention much sooner.
- Different music while Plague is doxxing Dade's mom.
- Removed "I hope you don't screw like you type.". Wanted to restore "fsck", but the whole line is badly looped anyways. Cleaner to just remove.
- Removed "RISC is good".
- When they are messing with Gill, during the classified ad hack, we no longer see/hear what Dade types. It's left to our imagination.
- Shortened scene with people calling into Gill re: the classified ad.
- Different music during dream #2
- Different music when Dade receives the laptop.
- Different music when Joey gives Phreak the disk
- Removed Phreak's dream sequence (the movie has already given us a dream fake out).
- Removed "Deja vu!"
- Added music when Kate gets the disk from the place where Phreak hid the thing that time.
- Different music when Dade delivers the disk to Eugene.
- Different music when Dade decompiles the worm.
- Custom keyboard foley when Dade decompiles the worm.
- Removed all code vision shots when Dade decompiles the worm.
- Partially corrected visible guide wire for the flare gun.
- Different music when Plague launches the virus.
- Removed Urban Dance Squad cameo.
- Moved "Good Grief" to background digetic while Dade and Kate are waiting to see R&B
- Removed Dade getting thrown off stage and crowd-surfing back to where he started.
- Removed, "Where were you!?"
- Custom keyboard foley for the various laptops.
- Fixed weird white splotch on "BARF BAG".
- Enhanced VFX when Dade first connects to the Gibson.
- Different music during the big hacking montage (spinning phone booths, etc.) [this is Hooverphonic's "Autoharp" with the "Dr. Walter Doo-Dahs" removed]
- Removed Margo's "Flu shot, cancer, brain cancer" line.
- Enhanced VFX while Dade is searching for the garbage file.
- Removed, "type cookie, you idiot". [this one was hard, but the removal leads right into "run antivirus", which makes a ton more sense in response to "what should I do?"]
- Removed "I'll head them off at the pass"
- Removed code vision when Dade finds the garbage file.
- Downgraded DaVinci's appearance (in a few places)
- Removed "zero bug, unholy files"
- Removed "die dickweed"
- Removed "send a flu shot"
- Removed "rabbit, flu shot, someone talk to me"
- Removed "Cancer!?"
- Removed "Is that all you've got, etc."
- Removed Davinci yelling, 'HELP ME!!!'
- Removed "arf arf, we gotcha"
- Removed "viruses everywhere!"
- Enhanced VFX when Dade finds the garbage file.
- Removed code vision while Joey copies the file.
- Different SFX when Joey copies the file.
- Different music when they kill the Gibson.
- Different music when Dade is arrested.
- Removed Margo's laugh during the champagne moment.
- Removed Eugene and Margo dashing towards the bedroom.
- Different music during Cereal's broadcast.
- Removed shot of Margo groping around the bed looking for Eugene.
- Removed Cereal's "kinda feel like god" line.
- Removed Margo yelling, "Eugene!"
- Different music when Margo is arrested.
- Different music when Belford is arrested.
- Removed shot of Satellite in orbit.
- Removed "Stewardess! I'll never fly this airline again!"
- Different music during Crash and Burn's date.
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